Yesterday I woke up around 7 o’clock to go to school. I went to shower for 10 minutes and then I ate breakfast. After I ate my food I went to the bus stop. I waited for 15 minutes and realized that the bus wouldn’t come. I had to walk and I would be late so that depressed me a little.
When finally I arrived to school I noticed that there were no students at all. I was very confused because nobody told me that there were no school. I was relieved but also annoyed. I started walking to home but I realized that I didn’t see any people on the streets but I ignored that. I just headed back to home.
Then when I was just to arrive to home I saw a huge explosion. It was very far away from me but it didnt effect me at all so I ignored it. Then I saw Estonian war planes in the sky. They started bombing Itäkeskus but I didnt care, I just went home. When I arrived to home I opened my laptop, but then my mom called and told me to go to the nearest air-raid shelter, but I told i was fine. I took a nap and when I woke up Estonia had conquered Finland. Then my mom and I moved to Russia.
September 12, 2012 at 10:46 am
Well you had a quite intresting day which started out slow ended out with you leaving country. It was really funny story and i laughed when the war started when you were going home and ignored everything. Well your story escalated quickly! I do think you could have added some pictures but the post was quite good. It was little bit unrealistic but i don’t live in the same country as you so i can’t really know. Because information comes slowly to vietnam
September 12, 2012 at 10:55 am
You’re a good writer. You should start writing books. Brilliant post!
September 12, 2012 at 11:06 am
Ex-Hemuli28! Cool post bro. 😀
September 12, 2012 at 11:12 am
Very nicely wrote story and it was scary too!!
September 23, 2012 at 1:37 pm
What a story! I was already a bit scared that you would wake up from a dream too, but luckily, you didn’t do that! 🙂
The story is quite well written and the language easy to understand. Just pay more attention to the tenses and word order next time. And change the name under which you’re blogging.
-woke up at around…
-I went to have a shower of about 10 minutes
-After I had eaten, I went…
-I had to walk and I knew that I’d be late and that….
-When I finally arrived at school, I noticed (word order)
-nobody HAD told me that there WAS no school
-I started walking home. I realized that…. , but I …
-back _ home
-and it didn’T affect me (affect vs.effect!)
-some Estonian
-when I came home, I opened my…
-Then my mom…
-I with a CAPITAL LETTER (use the ABC proofread button!)
Media appearance: no pics?