Day before the day, I siting in computer and my dream is that someone get me in
abroad. I pack my bag and I believe my dream. Mum says don´t “dreaming is
healthy.” But I hope that is true. I eating so when always, I sleep and I
dreaming. I don´t ever dreaming this much. I visited in school and I learn. NOW
IT HAPPENS..
My room door open and there stood handsome boy. My heart is fire. I look him
mouth open and I think “I know, this happens, I know, I know”. Now we´re going
to the airport. He says with me, we going, we going.. I waiting what he say,
but he say only we going.. in LAPLAND.. WHAT ? what you say ? in Lapland ??
yes, in lapland.. he laugh and say never, we going in Australia.
We spent, nice 2 weeks in Australia. We swimming, eating good food, sleeping,
sun oneself and party. And now I wake up in my dream…
A Day to Remember 
September 12, 2012 at 10:55 am
Haha! Funny. It was nice that first did not know was it a dream or not. The picture is cool too. I like your text! It made me laugh. KEEP ON DREAMING! 😀
September 12, 2012 at 11:21 am
Perfect dream! When I began to read your text i didn’t know was it a dream or not 😀 Really good text Rebekka! 🙂
September 12, 2012 at 5:07 pm
Your post is so funny!! I laughed really. 😀 Don`t believe your mom!! You have to keep dreaming. I hope that you get to austaria one day… mayby with handsome boy 😉
September 23, 2012 at 12:54 pm
Contents: the story commences well because in the first paragraph you manage to make the reader curious about what will happen in the second paragraph. The arrival of Prince Charming is also touching but somehow ruined byt the cliché like ending of a dream from which you just woke up. Next time try to avoid these kinds of super common “easy-way-out” endings, please.
Grammar: since at times it is a bit hard to understand the meaning of your sentences, you should start reading a lot of texts in English. Reading is a good way to improve your language skills.Don’t give up but work hard. Your starting point is not bad.
-start the text with “I WAS sitting in from of my computer and dreaming about someone who would take me abroad.”
-I packED my bagS since I believeD in …
-My mum said that dreaming isN’T
-I ate as I always do, I slept and went on dreaming
-I had never dreamt
-I went to school (you don’t visit school if you study there)
-I learned some new things
-And then it happened.
-the door of my room openED
-A handsome boy
-my heart was on fire
-I lookED at him my mouth…
-I thought “this is true. I know it”. And all of a sudden we were going…
-He said that we were going to…. he paused and I waited. …To Lapland
-“What are you saying?To Lapland?”
-“Yes”, he said and laughED. But actually we were going to Australia where we spent two nice weeks swimming, eating, getting tanned and partying. And then I woke up.
Media appearance: the picture is clever and suitable to your post